Aims---to explain how the Ft. Hood shooting evolved through the news as time went on. Methods---Introduces how newspapers and blogs work together in order to develop the essay. Materials---sources from the New York Times Key Passage---"From my reading of different blogs and news stories I have come to the following conclusion, news sites want the facts, while many bloggers give their take on the whole ordeal. The main difference is fact and opinion." Strengths---very good personal input Weaknesses---lacks backup from sources
Well written paper. Good conclusions drawn but needs more backup.
Aims: possibly to show how the Fort Hood shooting was first broadcasted on, and how it grew. Methods: compares and contrasts blogs versus the New York Times Materials: New York Times Key Passage: "I have found that a combination of both blogs and news sites is the best way to obtain information about a major story." Strengths: begins to show opinion Weaknesses: is unfinished
I like how you have started out, but you need to continue.
Aims---to explain how the Ft. Hood shooting evolved through the news as time went on.
ReplyDeleteMethods---Introduces how newspapers and blogs work together in order to develop the essay.
Materials---sources from the New York Times
Key Passage---"From my reading of different blogs and news stories I have come to the following conclusion, news sites want the facts, while many bloggers give their take on the whole ordeal. The main difference is fact and opinion."
Strengths---very good personal input
Weaknesses---lacks backup from sources
Well written paper. Good conclusions drawn but needs more backup.
Aims: possibly to show how the Fort Hood shooting was first broadcasted on, and how it grew.
ReplyDeleteMethods: compares and contrasts blogs versus the New York Times
Materials: New York Times
Key Passage: "I have found that a combination of both blogs and news sites is the best way to obtain information about a major story."
Strengths: begins to show opinion
Weaknesses: is unfinished
I like how you have started out, but you need to continue.