Monday, September 28, 2009

Unit 1

Here is my essay, it is very rough. http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0AdsTTcS951fiZGNoM2NxdnBfMDZicWNobmRi&hl=en sorry about the last link, it would'nt go through to the paper.

3 comments:

  1. You bring up very good points. I like how you connect the internet to other forms of communication and describe the advantages and disadvantages. It would be nice to hear more of your personal opinions of the issues.

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  2. I liked how deeply you went into the history of literacy and the development of writing. I agree with Jeff. I wish you would have explained more of what you thought about the issues, but otherwise, I think it has good potential.

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  3. Aims/Purposes---to explain the advantages and disadvantages of the internet. To explain how the internet can be used.
    Methods---Uses a timeline of how communication has evolved throughout history.
    Materials---Articles from class
    Keywords/keyphrases---The invention of the computer and the internet can be used as a great tool of discovery.
    Uses---paper flows very nicely
    Limits---Needs more personal input

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